Great story! Some interesting reflections on sobriety, relationships, and public drunkenness. I liked the part about circles shrinking. Sometimes circles don't respond to witty comments and that's hurtful. Your response matters to some of us! And how about those chicken nuggets!? I love nuggets. And Tom Cochrane. Yes, a great story.
I thought you'd appreciate the Life is a Highway bit. Baldfaced liars are some of my favourite characters, along with overly confiident characters, highly-sensitive characters, overly serious characters...
Thanks! I'm glad you spotted that. Next week I'm posting about the writing of this piece, and that's the key point really. I wanted the reader to see the protagonist's dysfunctional loop while the character stayed blind to it.
If life is a highway...choose your roadhouses' wisely
Good read Luke
In that case, I choose Corio Bay. Thanks for reading :)
Great story! Some interesting reflections on sobriety, relationships, and public drunkenness. I liked the part about circles shrinking. Sometimes circles don't respond to witty comments and that's hurtful. Your response matters to some of us! And how about those chicken nuggets!? I love nuggets. And Tom Cochrane. Yes, a great story.
Thanks, Steph! The Circle is dead to me, haha! Thank you for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate it.
Very visual storytelling, some funny moments for sure. Only an outsider to AA could have written this, haha. Thanks for caring, thanks for sharing.
I thought you'd appreciate the Life is a Highway bit. Baldfaced liars are some of my favourite characters, along with overly confiident characters, highly-sensitive characters, overly serious characters...
Great Luke . A vision of disfunction . Well done
Thanks! I'm glad you spotted that. Next week I'm posting about the writing of this piece, and that's the key point really. I wanted the reader to see the protagonist's dysfunctional loop while the character stayed blind to it.