Another great one. I kept trying to figure out who the couple was, and whether or not the inspiration for the God character was me. Perhaps that says more about me than the story. Perhaps I am the inspiration, perhaps the character wasn't god, perhaps I am god?
I really enjoyed your balance of suspense and intrigue whilst offering small moments of realisation compelling enough to want to read more.
Luke, loved this, you are very talented. There is a beautiful short film to be made from this.
Very good story. I love how your writing creates such clear imagery.
Another great one. I kept trying to figure out who the couple was, and whether or not the inspiration for the God character was me. Perhaps that says more about me than the story. Perhaps I am the inspiration, perhaps the character wasn't god, perhaps I am god?