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Georgia's avatar

Great story . In particular I liked how you described the characters using their traits and life story rather than just what you see ❤️ a good read

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Luke Skelton's avatar

Thank you! I try to avoid saying someone is tall, etc. unless that trait adds something.

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Mr Penis's avatar

Ehh

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Luke Skelton's avatar

Thank you for such a kind word, Mr Penis.

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