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Louise Greenwood's avatar

"the path to the private jetty that backed onto the Yarra, and the piñata dangling from the heritage-listed jacaranda." Gold!

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Luke Skelton's avatar

Thanks, Louise :) I had in mind those giant houses in Toorak at the end of St Georges Road.

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Jacques's avatar

"....nine bedroom, and eleven bathroom house" - programmed to see meaning in this number.

Also, remind me at some point to mention this: https://thescriptlab.com/features/screenwriting-101/9806-3-writing-lessons-on-suspense-from-alfred-hitchcock/ in the context of this story.

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Luke Skelton's avatar

Haha! Yeah, I'll remember. See you at lunch... next week!

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Georgia's avatar

Beautiful . Well written and a very good message

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