Shaun is rich, handsome and intelligent. He holds the secret to the ideal life and, at his daughter's birthday party, he shares it with a young father.
"the path to the private jetty that backed onto the Yarra, and the piñata dangling from the heritage-listed jacaranda." Gold!
"....nine bedroom, and eleven bathroom house" - programmed to see meaning in this number.
Also, remind me at some point to mention this: https://thescriptlab.com/features/screenwriting-101/9806-3-writing-lessons-on-suspense-from-alfred-hitchcock/ in the context of this story.
Beautiful . Well written and a very good message
"the path to the private jetty that backed onto the Yarra, and the piñata dangling from the heritage-listed jacaranda." Gold!
"....nine bedroom, and eleven bathroom house" - programmed to see meaning in this number.
Also, remind me at some point to mention this: https://thescriptlab.com/features/screenwriting-101/9806-3-writing-lessons-on-suspense-from-alfred-hitchcock/ in the context of this story.
Beautiful . Well written and a very good message